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Trust me, you can make it awesome.

I have watched a lot of stick fight movies. And I mean A LOT. A lot of the reviews and the comments below keep saying about how you should improve and shit but haven't really told you how. I'll tell you.

1. Add more moves and exaggerate the effects of the hits. Kicks are awesome and all but you gotta add more throws. If you search for a Flash in Newgrounds called "The Wall", you would see that the stick fight in that flash is not as intense like most people. But, it managed to gain popularity because it used weapons, different way of fighting people and a little bit of humor. The wall even cracked when he shoved that guy against the wall. That's what I mean by exaggerating.

2. Make it more intense. Look at Terkoiz's work and you will see that his work is pretty awesome. Probably because he makes his fights intense. 10 guys all moving simultaneously to take on that one guy. You can add more intensity buy adding more mid tiers and more weaknesses on the hero. At least there's suspense and it doesn't get boring. Even Dragon Ball uses the same technique.

3. Change sound effects. Audio is crucial in stick fights. It makes up 30-50% of the atmosphere in the fight. Find a solid audio to accompany the hitting sounds, and you got yourself something good.

4. Add a story. Xiaoxiao never had a story and it's understandable since the guy who made it was Chinese and didn't knew much English. But ever since then, almost everything had to have a story. A backstory is fine. I mean, what IS Abercity? Where is it? What does it do? Why are there people who are fighting him? And why is he fighting them? Is he the bad guy?

5. Research some martial arts. Know what parts of your body that can be used to fight. Arms,legs,knee,elbow,head,feet,fist. Everyone of these can be made visual.

I think I already told enough. But to keep it simple : The stick fights need more variety.

It touched me deeply.

For real. I know you're making a long credit to show comedy and all but I really think you should make a third one.

This is awesome. For some reason, the part where the sister says "You gotta admit, he achieved something most of us would dream about" touched me deeply.

Make the next one. It's awesome. I wanna see the kid do something too. I wanna see the drama and the awesome music I heard in the first one. Make an amazing storyline friend.

It's awesome.

It was short but it was compact full of what I'd expect. The epic zombie reveal from Resident Evil 1, the humorous middle scene, the girlfriend being a zombie, and of course the awesome ending.

Everything was correct here since the character was someone everyone can relate too and the situation was simple to understand. Not only that, it didn't show too much bravado by giving the character a whole arsenal of weapons to shoot everything down.

It was a bit short, and no dialogues which is a bit of a negative, but I guess it's cool. If you plan to make a series out of this, I totally recommend it.

Long story short: Story was good. Character was balanced. Situation understandable. Dark humor. And good quality of animation and sounds.

Kudos to you.

Constructive Review.

I always hear people telling other people to give constructive criticism. Well, here's mine.

Graphics: 9 : Overall, the graphics were great. The stickmen were smooth and the animations were fluid and all. No problems here.

Story: 6: At least give us some insight what's he so mad about. And what's his real objective is. Is he fighting for revenge or just he just wanna let of some steam?

Audio: 7 : I give it a 7 since it was pretty awesome, but i dont really like that kind of music so you have to ask somebody else on that department.

Gameplay: 10 : The gameplay is the best. When you play a power action game, you expect to have something like this. Powerful sounds, moving screen and a whole lot of power. Nowadays, not even flash, even console games are starting to lack this fundementals.

Overall, there's not really much to improve. Just, a story, and a better background art i guess. The rest were fine.

Let me guess, you were inspired by HL2?

It was pretty obvious since i've been watching HL2 and 1 for a couple of weeks now since i dont have the graphics card to install them.

All i can say was this lack explanation. And talking. There was only talking during the beginning and then it was self explanatory. I mean, first of all you should at least give a hint on why there are people in the tanks. Or why was she on the moon.

That way, viewers will grasp the situation and try to figure out the next plot. Also, the suit needs to be explained as well.

This is a good piece of work but it lacks talking. But it is the first episode. I expect more talking and a bit of humor in the next episode. Until then, good luck.

This game is...

The songs in the game is pretty fammiliar.On the scene where Ron says "Looks like your luna is in good condition"the sound there feels like Front Mission 4.Wish there was a little bit of romance in that game though.

Since i havent finished this game yet,i want to ask a few questions.1.Is there any romance in this game?i reckon there is a 70% yes and 10% maybe while 20%no.
2.i forgot...but still,you should make your own music.At least 3 min long.Trust me,sound plays an important role in games coz even the graphic isnt that good,you can make people close their eyes and think of their own images.Like me when im playing runescape.THat game graphics,sucks.Really.

This game is on its way to sucess but it needs voice acting execpt for the name calling.This game also hasnt released its true potential.Yes the conversation is a little corny but still thats why script writers are for!I recommend searching the RPG forums coz they have big imagination and they can do anything even in a controlled enviroment.

Find an anime artist in the Art forum and pay them some money.Art requires money but Scriptwriting doesnt.Or do they?

ANyway,this game has a lot of potential.Its just the matter of how to achieve its maximum potential.thats all i have to say and im happy that i reviewed this game.A lot of hardwork has been pushed into this game,i know.Making a stick movie may be the simpelest but that doesnt mean its still isnt hard. that is all for now.Keep going and dont give up!

I love this audio.

I love this audio. I hated the flash.

Depressing with a mix of joy.

This seemed....dark....yet it has light in it.

Oh well. I loved it. Make more.

The best i've heard so far!

No doubt. A ten. THE BEST.

If you can make this longer, this audio would be perfect for a romance scene!